Words fall like stones,
To the bottom of a pond.
Taking life with them.

Yes, one more syllable would make it a proper haiku 🙂

 This image is one that formed in my head several years ago, as I received the worst kind of bad news.  Each word, as it was delivered was a stone and as it fell, so too did hope and life.

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